Talk:News briefs: April 28, 2012

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Script review comments[edit]

The Sandra Fluke item isn't in an acceptable state, tbh. It doesn't explain what the award is, i.e., who gives it; without which, the story can't be understood properly. (I also pulled material that isn't part of a summary of our article, nor, that I could find, even contained in any of the Related news articles.)

The other items, I believe are now okay (following some edits during review). --Pi zero (talk) 04:24, 28 April 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1483755 [Passed][edit]