Talk:Ovais Singstar's "Satranga" Revisited: A Fresh Take on a Timeless Classic

Review of revision 4799180 [Not ready]

Revision 4799180 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:26, 25 September 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: looks like reworded original source, which is allowed, however the rephrasing is still too close to the source in meaning and grammar which i think is insufficiently far from source Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: Two independent sources are required but only one was provided. NPOV: Not ready: Opinions like 'is set to captivate audiences' and 'highly anticipated' need to be removed. Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Please find additional source and write answer to 5Ws without promotion, if possible. It is challenging to report news event without specified date. Perhaps wait and then write the article when the 'Sartanga' is actually released? (You are welcome to view the Newsroom and edit other drafts to gain more practice editing news.) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4799180 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:26, 25 September 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: looks like reworded original source, which is allowed, however the rephrasing is still too close to the source in meaning and grammar which i think is insufficiently far from source Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: Two independent sources are required but only one was provided. NPOV: Not ready: Opinions like 'is set to captivate audiences' and 'highly anticipated' need to be removed. Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Please find additional source and write answer to 5Ws without promotion, if possible. It is challenging to report news event without specified date. Perhaps wait and then write the article when the 'Sartanga' is actually released? (You are welcome to view the Newsroom and edit other drafts to gain more practice editing news.) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.