Talk:Palestinian prisoner Khader Adnan stops hunger strike, due to be released

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Review of revision 3633019 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 3633019 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:00, 27 June 2015 (UTC).[reply]

  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not ready: Tangled situation, made worse by delayed review; see below.
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
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Comments by reviewer:

  • Big picture: the stated focus (50th day) is uncertain; a change of focus isn't something a reviewer can do, and there's no good alternative here atm. Perhaps the reporter can provide an alternative focus, but it'd unfortunately need to be some new development at this point.
  • One source from Wednesday says "almost" 50 days. The other from Wednesday says "50 days" rather casually and I doubt it's a precise figure. The source from Monday says six weeks (which would be approximately 42 days). None of the sources say just when he started the strike.
  • Apparently, PHR made its statement on Wednesday, ICRC on Tuesday, PIJ on Monday. Each of those events has just one source here, and the most recent of them is about to pass into its fourth calendar day.

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Revision 3633019 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:00, 27 June 2015 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not ready: Tangled situation, made worse by delayed review; see below.
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer:

  • Big picture: the stated focus (50th day) is uncertain; a change of focus isn't something a reviewer can do, and there's no good alternative here atm. Perhaps the reporter can provide an alternative focus, but it'd unfortunately need to be some new development at this point.
  • One source from Wednesday says "almost" 50 days. The other from Wednesday says "50 days" rather casually and I doubt it's a precise figure. The source from Monday says six weeks (which would be approximately 42 days). None of the sources say just when he started the strike.
  • Apparently, PHR made its statement on Wednesday, ICRC on Tuesday, PIJ on Monday. Each of those events has just one source here, and the most recent of them is about to pass into its fourth calendar day.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 3644445 [Passed][edit]

Revision 3644445 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:18, 1 July 2015 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Revision 3644445 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:18, 1 July 2015 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Edit[edit]

{{editprotected}} Last line of the first paragraph reads "and placed him in in Assaf Harofe hospital in Israel." The two in should not be there.
14.139.242.195 (talk) 10:14, 15 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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