Talk:Peltola defeats Palin, Begich in Alaska special election for US House of Representatives

From Wikinews, the free news source you can write!
Jump to navigation Jump to search

Review of revision 4688754 [Not ready][edit]

@Bigfluffycow: Don't forget to resubmit for a second review once you feel you have made the required improvements to the article. Cheers, --SVTCobra 22:50, 3 September 2022 (UTC)Reply[reply]

@SVTCobra: I think I fixed the source issue, but I wasn't exactly sure what the formatting issues were. I added some categories and made some of the paragraphs shorter. Is there anything else in the formatting that needs to be fixed? Thank you, Bigfluffycow (talk) 14:31, 4 September 2022 (UTC)Reply[reply]
@Bigfluffycow:, I made some changes which I felt were necessary. I obviously don't know exactly what JJ is looking for, but I resubmitted for review. --SVTCobra 16:44, 4 September 2022 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Hey, big improvements. Love it. Should be ready for publication now, just wanted to add that this article has a lot of potential in terms of being more substantial: perhaps mentioning Palin's history as McCain's running mate or some of the quotes in AP, or the significance insofar as being the first Alaska Native, Alaskans last voting a Democrat for president in 1964 &c. That's what distinguishes a good article from a GREAT article. If nothing else is done in maybe six hours I'll gladly publish. But that's my opinion. JJLiu112 (talk) 20:19, 4 September 2022 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Review of revision 4689121 [Passed][edit]