Talk:Peltola defeats Palin, Begich in Alaska special election for US House of Representatives

Review of revision 4688754 [Not ready]

Revision 4688754 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:23, 2 September 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: No paywalled articles; Washington Post. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Please see past articles for precedent on how to format articles. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4688754 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:23, 2 September 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: No paywalled articles; Washington Post. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Please see past articles for precedent on how to format articles. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

@Bigfluffycow: Don't forget to resubmit for a second review once you feel you have made the required improvements to the article. Cheers, --SVTCobra 22:50, 3 September 2022 (UTC)

@SVTCobra: I think I fixed the source issue, but I wasn't exactly sure what the formatting issues were. I added some categories and made some of the paragraphs shorter. Is there anything else in the formatting that needs to be fixed? Thank you, Bigfluffycow (talk) 14:31, 4 September 2022 (UTC)

@Bigfluffycow:, I made some changes which I felt were necessary. I obviously don't know exactly what JJ is looking for, but I resubmitted for review. --SVTCobra 16:44, 4 September 2022 (UTC)

Hey, big improvements. Love it. Should be ready for publication now, just wanted to add that this article has a lot of potential in terms of being more substantial: perhaps mentioning Palin's history as McCain's running mate or some of the quotes in AP, or the significance insofar as being the first Alaska Native, Alaskans last voting a Democrat for president in 1964 &c. That's what distinguishes a good article from a GREAT article. If nothing else is done in maybe six hours I'll gladly publish. But that's my opinion. JJLiu112 (talk) 20:19, 4 September 2022 (UTC)

Review of revision 4689121 [Passed]

Revision 4689121 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:14, 5 September 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Approved, although there was much potential to flesh out the article. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4689121 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:14, 5 September 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Approved, although there was much potential to flesh out the article. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.