Talk:Pope Francis dies at age 88

Review of revision 4851458 [Passed]

Revision 4851458 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 07:13, 22 April 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: 1) Style: needed editing I added infobox. 2) NPOV: borderline unacceptable, as there is only one quote provided. It would be important, and nearly required, to include responses from important public figures, and/or an aftermath (where funeral planned, whether there were large gatherings to mark the occurrence, who is going to be next Pope now, etc). 3) 5W: missing 'how' (cause/diagnosis). [In obituaries, it's also common to include a note who of his family outlived him, if anyone did.] If possible, please address the latter two points and leave a message at the talk page, so that I can approve the edits (this can be done within 24 hours after publishing). Thank you. Keep up the great work. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4851458 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 07:13, 22 April 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: 1) Style: needed editing I added infobox. 2) NPOV: borderline unacceptable, as there is only one quote provided. It would be important, and nearly required, to include responses from important public figures, and/or an aftermath (where funeral planned, whether there were large gatherings to mark the occurrence, who is going to be next Pope now, etc). 3) 5W: missing 'how' (cause/diagnosis). [In obituaries, it's also common to include a note who of his family outlived him, if anyone did.] If possible, please address the latter two points and leave a message at the talk page, so that I can approve the edits (this can be done within 24 hours after publishing). Thank you. Keep up the great work. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision requested

Hi @Camillz and @BigKrow

Hope you're doing well. Please see the note above; if you could please address points 2 and 3, it would be greatly appreciated. I can approve edits to the article within the next up to 24 hours. (After this time period, the article will be archived, and further edits can only be accepted in rare cases (if some information was incorrect) via a 'correction'.)

Many thanks, Gryllida (talk) 07:15, 22 April 2025 (UTC)

@Lofi Gurl @Wikiwide ^^ Thanks Gryllida (talk) 17:12, 22 April 2025 (UTC)

Approved @Wikiwide's changes (thank you!), except one half of sentence about Leo (last paragraph), and Croatian official (second paragraph) as they could not be verified in sources. Remaining missing information: who the Pope was outlived by, from his family, if anyone. Gryllida (talk) 21:17, 22 April 2025 (UTC)