Talk:SUV strikes bus carrying suburban high school students in Chicago

Up for review

Thanks BigKrow (talk) 18:52, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

@Lofi Gurl, thank you! BigKrow (talk) 20:31, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

no problemo! Lofi Gurl (talk) 20:37, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

Review of revision 4854397 [Passed]

Revision 4854397 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:12, 3 May 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: More detail could be added. Such as, a source says bus was stopped at red light, SUV tried to make right turn. Some other source says the bus needed to swerve. Please check. Some detail about this could be added into the article. I can approve this within up to 24 hours after publishing. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4854397 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:12, 3 May 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: More detail could be added. Such as, a source says bus was stopped at red light, SUV tried to make right turn. Some other source says the bus needed to swerve. Please check. Some detail about this could be added into the article. I can approve this within up to 24 hours after publishing. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Minor revision requested

Hi @George Ho @Wikiwide @BigKrow @Lofi Gurl @Back ache @Md Mobashir Hossain @Almondo2025, @Dsuke1998AEOS, @Ternera, @Monsieur2137 @Asked42 (if you want yourself removed or someone else added to this list, please inquire here) A revision has been requested. Here is a list of what to do. (If/when you intend to start working on it, please leave a message or mark the article with {{editing}}) See below:

• add detail how the vehicles were positioned at time of crash (see comment above)

Thanks, -- Gryllida (talk) 14:13, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

Hi @Gryllida:, I'm very busy today but I have Done the change as requested. I also specified the number of injured students, which is unlikely to increase by now. Dsuke1998AEOS (talk) 17:27, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

Ok @Dsuke1998AEOS. I approved the edit. Does "when his vehicle was struck on its passenger side" actually mean "when he crashed the passenger side of his car into the bus"? As it seems the bus was stationary (waiting on red light) and could not strike on the SUV's passenger side. Gryllida (talk) 19:20, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

Yes, and the content of the FOX32 Chicago source implies that the bus was deliberately avoiding the car, but the other source does not say anything about whether the bus was trying to get out of the way. Dsuke1998AEOS (talk) 19:29, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

Ok better to write in active voice. Please change if you have a spare minute. Thanks a lot Gryllida (talk) 19:43, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

Minor revision requested

Hi @George Ho @Wikiwide @BigKrow @Lofi Gurl @Back ache @Md Mobashir Hossain @Almondo2025, @Dsuke1998AEOS, @Ternera, @Monsieur2137 @Asked42 (if you want yourself removed or someone else added to this list, please inquire here) A revision has been requested. Here is a list of what to do. (If/when you intend to start working on it, please leave a message or mark the article with {{editing}}) See below:

• add source for the 'one killed' bit added by an anonymous contributor
• clarify whether it's one of the 17, or 17 injured + 1 killed

This needs to be done urgently as the article was published about 16 hours ago, and there are only 8 hours remaining to complete the revision.

Thanks, -- Gryllida (talk) 06:17, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

May need {{correction}} if the article becomes uneditable by then. George Ho (talk) 06:33, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

Yeah, I am nicely do it! But you should recheck it must @Gryllida. Md Mobashir Hossain (talk) 06:37, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

Ok, thank you. Approved the edit. No need for "correction", because article was published less than 24 hours ago. I could not find a source for "one killed", either. Gryllida (talk) 10:18, 4 May 2025 (UTC)