Talk:Second data recorder is found for China Eastern flight 5735
Note to reviewer[edit]
The BBC source says the flight data recorder was found on Saturday, however the other two sources say Sunday, with one even providing the exact time of day, so I discounted the BBC on this fact. I suspect it may be an error due to time differences, but of course, I can't be sure. --SVTCobra 01:34, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
Review of revision 4670901 [Passed][edit]
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Revision 4670901 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:30, 29 March 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Some of these really verge on paraphrasing: "scattered debris widely" vs original "widely strewn debris". But good for recognising appropriate synonyms and so forth. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4670901 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:30, 29 March 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Some of these really verge on paraphrasing: "scattered debris widely" vs original "widely strewn debris". But good for recognising appropriate synonyms and so forth. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Review of revision 4670903 [Passed][edit]
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Revision 4670903 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:31, 29 March 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: In some areas near to paraphrasing: "widely strewn debris" (original) vs "scattered debris widely" (NPR). Nonetheless good for recognising synonyms and so forth. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4670903 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:31, 29 March 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: In some areas near to paraphrasing: "widely strewn debris" (original) vs "scattered debris widely" (NPR). Nonetheless good for recognising synonyms and so forth. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
@JJLiu112: Indeed! Sometimes it is hard to find other words when one has read some good ones. I just couldn't come up with a better word than "debris". Secondly, I do like how you re-ordered the latter paragraphs in the article. I do agree it reads better after that. Cheers, --SVTCobra 05:49, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- P.S. Why are there two passing reviews? Just curious. Cheers, --SVTCobra 05:51, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- Woops! Glitch, I guess. JJLiu112 (talk) 06:02, 29 March 2022 (UTC)