Talk:Seven civilians killed in Afghan police mistake

Review of revision 952758 [Failed]

Revision 952758 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:50, 6 February 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Only two paragraphs. Comments by reviewer: You need at least three medium-sized paragraphs to get a published Wikinews article. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 952758 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:50, 6 February 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Only two paragraphs. Comments by reviewer: You need at least three medium-sized paragraphs to get a published Wikinews article. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Precedent one; two; three; four. These articles are shorter than this one, yet are published. Could you explain to me what is different about them to allow them to be published? I can add a line break in if you wish. — μ 14:03, February 6 2010 (UTC)

All of them have writing which is distributed between evenly between three articles. Edit the article so that the writing is spread across three paragraphs, or ask another editor for their opinion if you prefer. --Rayboy8 (my talk) (my contributions) 14:08, 6 February 2010 (UTC)

Review of revision 953121 [Passed]

Revision 953121 of this article has been reviewed by TUFKAAP (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:34, 7 February 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 953121 of this article has been reviewed by TUFKAAP (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:34, 7 February 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.