Talk:Seventeen dead in Afghan bathhouse bombing

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Review of revision 1157440 [Failed][edit]

Revision 1157440 of this article has been reviewed by Wackywace (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 18:06, 7 January 2011 (UTC).[reply]

  • Copyright: Not ready: Although fair use images are permitted, they must not be taken from rival news agencies.
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
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Revision 1157440 of this article has been reviewed by Wackywace (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 18:06, 7 January 2011 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not ready: Although fair use images are permitted, they must not be taken from rival news agencies.
  • Newsworthiness: Passed
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer: None added.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Ok, I removed the copyrighted photo from the article, should be ready for review now. Ashershow1talk 18:48, 7 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Can someone review this before it gets stale? Ashershow1talk 23:31, 8 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1158541 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1158541 of this article has been reviewed by Gopher65 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:54, 9 January 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: There was a fair bit of unsourced information in this article. I removed it. I don't know where this was because you were using another source that didn't get listed here, or because you were taking info from the Wikipedia page, but either way, you have to be more careful about that.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1158541 of this article has been reviewed by Gopher65 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:54, 9 January 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: There was a fair bit of unsourced information in this article. I removed it. I don't know where this was because you were using another source that didn't get listed here, or because you were taking info from the Wikipedia page, but either way, you have to be more careful about that.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

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{{sudo}} Please change the last paragraph from US Embassy in Afghanistan to The US Embassy in Afghanistan. — μ 23:16, 26 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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