Talk:Shark fatally bites 17-year-old off Bribie Island

While awaiting review

CheatCodes4ever, I took a quick look at this article and noticed the following things can be done while it awaits formal review:

• If there are free or fair use images available, they could be added to improve readability
• An infobox could be added to provide readers related articles to read if they enjoy this one
• All times should include their timezone and a conversion to UTC, required by WN:Style
• While it does meet the minimum 100-word limit, perhaps it could be expanded with more details for the reader
• Also consider how and why the focal event would impact more than 100 people and incorporate that into the article. See WN:Relevant for details.

Doing these things before the review will greatly improve its chances of getting published. —Michael.C.Wright (^Talk/_Reviewer) 18:04, 3 February 2025 (UTC); edited 18:06, 3 February 2025 (UTC)

Review of revision 4838961 [Passed]

Revision 4838961 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:49, 7 February 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Thank you for your continued edits to help get this article published. I've made some changes, which you can view in the edit history. For future articles, consider following the inverted pyramid style of writing to improve clarity. Proofreading can also help catch and remove redundant statements—using AI/LLM tools might assist with this as well. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4838961 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:49, 7 February 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Thank you for your continued edits to help get this article published. I've made some changes, which you can view in the edit history. For future articles, consider following the inverted pyramid style of writing to improve clarity. Proofreading can also help catch and remove redundant statements—using AI/LLM tools might assist with this as well. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.