Talk:Spanish general, two other officials jailed for false IDs after air disaster
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Revision 821185 of this article has been reviewed by Computerjoe (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:45, 19 May 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I couldn't spot any problems big enough to prevent this from being published, but I am wary of your use of 'Turks' and 'Spaniards' for some reason. Instead of 'but blamed errors made by the Turks', can't you say Turkish government or military? It sounds like you're blaming to the entire Turkish nation! Computerjoe (talk) 21:45, 19 May 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 821185 of this article has been reviewed by Computerjoe (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:45, 19 May 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I couldn't spot any problems big enough to prevent this from being published, but I am wary of your use of 'Turks' and 'Spaniards' for some reason. Instead of 'but blamed errors made by the Turks', can't you say Turkish government or military? It sounds like you're blaming to the entire Turkish nation! Computerjoe (talk) 21:45, 19 May 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Fair comment, now I think about it. Ty for the quick review! Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 21:49, 19 May 2009 (UTC)
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{{editprotected}} There's no {{date}} (the reviewer removed it when manually publishing). Is it archive-compatible to add it? Heavy Water (talk) 18:20, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
Done It almost certainly will mess with the DPLs, but we absolutely need to have the date in there. SVTCobra 17:06, 30 December 2023 (UTC)- Actually, it looks OK. SVTCobra 17:08, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
