Talk:Suspects in slaying of pregnant North Dakota woman enter not guilty pleas

Review of revision 4341872 [Not ready]

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Revision 4341872 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:58, 29 August 2017 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: Not established by lede; see below. Verifiability: Not ready: See below. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: This has no sources; we require at least two mutually independent trust-worthy sources corroborating the focal event of a synthesis article. The lede does not say when the focal event occurred. Most required formatting elements are missing; if you create an article using one of the article creation forms scattered about the site, these elements should be provided automatically. Although very short paragraphs are admissible, too many of them can create a bullet-like effect that disrupts article flow. Please see WN:PILLARS, then WN:WRITE. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revamp

@Saza91: I did an overhaul of this article and added some sources and details. I'm sorry but I had to delete some of your stuff because I didn't see it in the articles I found. If you add the article you were using to the list of sources, we can put it back. I think the article is presentable now. Would you like to do the honors and hit "review"? We should move quickly so that this doesn't lose freshness (become so old that it's not news, usually two days). Darkfrog24 (talk) 20:58, 30 August 2017 (UTC)

You could also change the title of the article. Darkfrog24 (talk) 20:59, 30 August 2017 (UTC)

Title

I've updated the article to reflect this week's developments but the title seems pretty bleh to me. I don't mind if anyone changes it. Darkfrog24 (talk) 11:59, 1 September 2017 (UTC)

Review of revision 4342743 [Not ready]

Revision 4342743 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:23, 6 September 2017 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: Unfortunately, this got away from us and is no longer fresh. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4342743 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:23, 6 September 2017 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: Unfortunately, this got away from us and is no longer fresh. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Title

I'm planning something like "Suspects in Savanna Greywind killing plead not guilty" but I don't like to move the article more times than necessary, so I'm leaving the current one as a placeholder for now. Darkfrog24 (talk) 03:25, 28 September 2017 (UTC)

In case it's needed, corroboration: Valley News Live

Review of revision 4351649 [Passed]

Revision 4351649 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:55, 1 October 2017 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4351649 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:55, 1 October 2017 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.