Talk:Third person charged in relation to Pheobe Bishop's alleged murder
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Revision 4867198 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:37, 2 July 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: As part of the review process, attribution was added to statements regarding Mittelheuser’s alleged use of Bishop’s phone and the reported intent of the victim’s travel. A reference to the accused being “partners” was removed, as it was only mentioned in an image description and not considered critical to the story. The phrase “has became” was corrected, and other minor rephrasings addressed issues of tone and factual precision. Time formatting and numerical expressions were adjusted per WN:Style. The official charge wording was used for clarity. An infobox and two categories were added, and final edits improved grammar and punctuation throughout. See edit history for details. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4867198 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:37, 2 July 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: As part of the review process, attribution was added to statements regarding Mittelheuser’s alleged use of Bishop’s phone and the reported intent of the victim’s travel. A reference to the accused being “partners” was removed, as it was only mentioned in an image description and not considered critical to the story. The phrase “has became” was corrected, and other minor rephrasings addressed issues of tone and factual precision. Time formatting and numerical expressions were adjusted per WN:Style. The official charge wording was used for clarity. An infobox and two categories were added, and final edits improved grammar and punctuation throughout. See edit history for details. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |