Talk:Train crash in Netanya, Israel injures at least 50; no casualties
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[edit]"No" needs to be decapitalised, and isn't causualties supposed to be casualties? 74.34.148.222 (talk) 19:17, 7 April 2011 (UTC)
And casualties refers to any injury not not just death. So the statement "injuries at least 5o, no casualties" is self-contradictory. a more correct headline would state,"at least 50 injuries, no deaths reported".
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