Talk:Two students shot at Los Angeles school, suspect in custody

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Verified[edit]

Gone through the sources; Rev 1164587 is fact checked; waiting on categories, etc. — μ 22:11, 18 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Title[edit]

Title is unpublishable. Where? What country? In fact, the title doesn't even give me the continent. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 23:20, 18 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Renamed the article. Hope this helps. ConCompS (talk) 23:58, 18 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Current title works well. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 18:12, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1164769 [Failed][edit]

Revision 1164769 of this article has been reviewed by TUFKAAP (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:16, 19 January 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: It's a little short on info... hope it gets fleshed out.

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Revision 1164769 of this article has been reviewed by TUFKAAP (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:16, 19 January 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: It's a little short on info... hope it gets fleshed out.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1164769 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1164769 of this article has been reviewed by TUFKAAP (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:17, 19 January 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: My bad... forgot style category. It's a little late for me tonight.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1164769 of this article has been reviewed by TUFKAAP (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 04:17, 19 January 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: My bad... forgot style category. It's a little late for me tonight.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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