Talk:UN observers in Syria fired upon as report alleges US warplanes readying attack

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Review of revision 1976793 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 1976793 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 07:25, 28 August 2013 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: The problem seems to be the lede. It mentions August 21 as the date meaning this story is stale. It also doesn't read like a news lede.

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Revision 1976793 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 07:25, 28 August 2013 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: The problem seems to be the lede. It mentions August 21 as the date meaning this story is stale. It also doesn't read like a news lede.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

August 21[edit]

Read it again. It is stating the chemical attack occurred on August 21. DragonFire1024 (Talk to the Dragon) 16:35, 28 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The difficulty was likely caused by the absence from the lede of the date of the sniper incident. I added that, before the August 21 date (having consulted with the reporter as well as the sources). --Pi zero (talk) 20:45, 28 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1977120 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1977120 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:47, 28 August 2013 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Revision 1977120 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:47, 28 August 2013 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Categories[edit]

{{edit protected}} Please move this article from Category:Syria to Category:Syrian Civil War. Thank you. Green Giant (talk) 16:59, 1 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Added to the latter. --Pi zero (talk) 00:40, 2 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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