Talk:US, Florida: Hollywood train service halts in both directions for investigation of body discovered on tracks

Developing

I can't find a second source of yet. BigKrow (talk) 15:56, 27 May 2025 (UTC)

Up for review, tagging @Michael.C.Wright, @Gryllida thanks probably won't pass but will continue to work on as it goes BigKrow (talk) 16:54, 27 May 2025 (UTC)

Pre-review

Status:    No recommendation

Version evaluated: 4860877

• Copyright: Passed
• Newsworthiness: Passed
• Verifiability: Passed
• NPOV: Passed
• Style: Passed

Notes for author(s):

On style, I see a lot of passive voice, but the sources do not name the agents of the actions in question, which often leaves us past tense or nothing. This strikes me as the sort of local-interest story that is worth publishing for our international audience if it's so quick and easy that we have no reason not to. A cursory search for further sourcing (say, to see if the police had reported the woman's identity) turned up nothing as of today. Any drafters should use the time to refine and add substance to this article.

Notes for reviewer:

Not so much a thumbs-up as not a thumbs-down.

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Review of revision 4861084 [Passed]

Revision 4861084 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:10, 30 May 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Hi Gryllida, RockerballAustralia, Michael.C.Wright, Bddpaux, JJLiu112 1) Please check Wikinews:Watching pages and ensure you check the wiki every day. It is a pity that such a well written story missed review for 4 days. It was submitted way earlier. The article only needed minor edits and a rename. Hi @George Ho @Wikiwide @BigKrow @Lofi Gurl @Back ache @Md Mobashir Hossain @Almondo2025, @Dsuke1998AEOS, @Ternera, @Monsieur2137 @Asked42, @Sheminghui.WU, @excelblue (if you want yourself removed or someone else added to this list, please inquire here) A revision has been requested. Here is a list of what to do. (If/when you intend to start working on it, please Subscribe to this section and to this talk page, and post reply messages here when you started and finished editing) See below: 1) Surprised is the train still suspended?? Please update now, less than 24 hours from now, about this. Apparently this is not same Holywood as movies company, a different state, it would be good to add a clarification. Thank you. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4861084 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:10, 30 May 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Hi Gryllida, RockerballAustralia, Michael.C.Wright, Bddpaux, JJLiu112 1) Please check Wikinews:Watching pages and ensure you check the wiki every day. It is a pity that such a well written story missed review for 4 days. It was submitted way earlier. The article only needed minor edits and a rename. Hi @George Ho @Wikiwide @BigKrow @Lofi Gurl @Back ache @Md Mobashir Hossain @Almondo2025, @Dsuke1998AEOS, @Ternera, @Monsieur2137 @Asked42, @Sheminghui.WU, @excelblue (if you want yourself removed or someone else added to this list, please inquire here) A revision has been requested. Here is a list of what to do. (If/when you intend to start working on it, please Subscribe to this section and to this talk page, and post reply messages here when you started and finished editing) See below: 1) Surprised is the train still suspended?? Please update now, less than 24 hours from now, about this. Apparently this is not same Holywood as movies company, a different state, it would be good to add a clarification. Thank you. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.