Talk:US major general killed, 15 others wounded in insider attack in Afghanistan

Review of revision 2791170 [Passed]

Revision 2791170 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:56, 6 August 2014 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Hesitated, right at the end, over "light machine gun" versus "light assault rifle". One source used each term. Apparently the distinction is murky, so one probably can use either term and be within bounds; however, there seemed a better-than-even chance the source that said "light assault rifle" had chosen its term more carefully. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 2791170 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:56, 6 August 2014 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Hesitated, right at the end, over "light machine gun" versus "light assault rifle". One source used each term. Apparently the distinction is murky, so one probably can use either term and be within bounds; however, there seemed a better-than-even chance the source that said "light assault rifle" had chosen its term more carefully. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.