Talk:Ukrainian troops on Crimean border on high alert after rising tension with Russia

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Review of revision 4240776 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 4240776 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:37, 13 August 2016 (UTC).[reply]

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Comments by reviewer:

  • What, specifically, happened in the past few days? The only events I noticed pinned down specifically in time, here, were "last weekend". Has something happened just recently? If so, some such specific thing should be made the focus of both the headline ("tell the most important and unique thing") and the lede.

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Revision 4240776 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:37, 13 August 2016 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not ready: See below.
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer:

  • What, specifically, happened in the past few days? The only events I noticed pinned down specifically in time, here, were "last weekend". Has something happened just recently? If so, some such specific thing should be made the focus of both the headline ("tell the most important and unique thing") and the lede.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 4240968 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4240968 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:38, 14 August 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • The biggest difficulty with the other image is that it's apparently intended to be changed over time. Any image featured on a news article should be fixed for all time, as part of the archived snapshot in time. If using such an image is to be used, a separate version of it needs to be uploaded under a name that makes clear that it's the version as of a particular date. (Secondarily, it also wasn't clear to me quite what the image claimed to be showing.)

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Revision 4240968 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:38, 14 August 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • The biggest difficulty with the other image is that it's apparently intended to be changed over time. Any image featured on a news article should be fixed for all time, as part of the archived snapshot in time. If using such an image is to be used, a separate version of it needs to be uploaded under a name that makes clear that it's the version as of a particular date. (Secondarily, it also wasn't clear to me quite what the image claimed to be showing.)
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Outdated source[edit]

I noticed that one of the sources was from 2007, and I don't think that an 8-year old source is exactly fresh. Someone else might want to check up on that. --Queen Laura (talk) 21:16, 14 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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