Talk:White House announces immediate halt to U.S. military aid for Ukraine
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[edit]As part of the review process, I have intentionally not linked to the WP bio of Oleksandr Merezhko, as it has been flagged with numerous issues, namely too few sources. —Michael.C.Wright (Talk/Reviewer) 14:40, 5 March 2025 (UTC)
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Revision 4842659 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:01, 5 March 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: In the future, please take extra care when handling quotes. I noticed one that was slightly misquoted[1] (this may have been a typo or an issue with misplaced quotation marks). I also adjusted another quote to include the full statement for clarity instead of using a bracketed clarification[2]. Regarding analysis[3], [4], it's important to ensure neutrality. The following essay provides useful guidance: Wikinews:Neutrality#Attributing_subjective_judgements. I also restructured some content for clarity—breaking up a large run-on sentence and reordering paragraphs to align with the WN:PYRAMID structure. Lastly, I removed the mention of the 800 billion euro deal[5] because, according to the source, it refers to proposed EU defense spending rather than direct aid to Ukraine. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4842659 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:01, 5 March 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: In the future, please take extra care when handling quotes. I noticed one that was slightly misquoted[6] (this may have been a typo or an issue with misplaced quotation marks). I also adjusted another quote to include the full statement for clarity instead of using a bracketed clarification[7]. Regarding analysis[8], [9], it's important to ensure neutrality. The following essay provides useful guidance: Wikinews:Neutrality#Attributing_subjective_judgements. I also restructured some content for clarity—breaking up a large run-on sentence and reordering paragraphs to align with the WN:PYRAMID structure. Lastly, I removed the mention of the 800 billion euro deal[10] because, according to the source, it refers to proposed EU defense spending rather than direct aid to Ukraine. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |