Pepper spray vs. physical force

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I didn't write the article; I copyedited it, chose a title that was more appropriate on the basis of the submitted content, verified it tallied with the used sources, and published it.

If you think you can do better, please feel free to prove it by contributing rather than simply being a news "consumer".

22:38, 26 November 2011

You downplayed the primary subject (the pepper spray incident) by playing up the secondary story (suspension of the police). I'm sorry, but I don't trust you as a reporter.

01:42, 27 November 2011

No. You don't know what is news. The new aspect of the story is that the police officers were suspended, not that someone had been pepper sprayed.

Take your faux moral outrage elsewhere, or contribute constructively in the form of news articles.

08:38, 28 November 2011

I'm afraid you don't know what you are talking about. The news aspect is only about the pepper spraying of students, and the preponderance of reliable sources since the day of the event proves that fact. I maintain that you changed the subject of the article to distract the reader from the topic. To date, nobody cares that the officers were suspended; that's become a historical footnote to the issue of police pepper spraying non-violent protestors. All of the sources bear this out. I'm sorry to say it, but you're wrong. Your change of the headline deliberately downplayed the actual story, and took the secondary, minor aspect of the story and raised to the level of news. In other words, you manipulated the news story and you altered the primary topic. If the suspension of police officers was the story, then the media would still be talking about it. Newsflash: nobody is talking about it and nobody cares because it never was the primary story. And yet, the media is still talking about the unjustified, unauthorized, out of protocol pepper spraying of non-violent protesters. Game over.

09:42, 7 December 2011

News articles are different both from encyclopedia articles, and from blog entries. It seems pretty safe to say no one would write an encyclopedia entry about the police suspension, and apparently you would not have written a blog entry focusing on the suspension, either. However, a Wikinews article is written, using inverted pyramid style, about a news event. As our policy pages explain, a news event is specific, recent, and relevant. And yes, there is further elaboration of our criteria for recent, relevant, and (to some extent) specific. The news event that this article was written about, which was specific recent and relevant on November 21, 2011, was the suspension. Like many news events, it was part of a larger network of events, but that's the one that this particular article was written about, the story that was current that day — the story that was also the focus of the three sources drawn upon for this article (all articles from reputable news agencies). Note that the Sources section of a Wikinews article is not a link farm of handy links to other articles that people might be interested in, it is a permanent record of where the information for the Wikinews article came from. Also note that the lede answers, as called for by inverted pyramid style, as many as reasonably possible of the basic questions about the news event.

15:45, 7 December 2011

I completely and totally disagree with your assessment. The suspension was not newsworthy at any time, however, the pepper-spraying of the students was and still is, with major reports in the process of being released in a matter of days to weeks - all of which highlight the incident, not the suspension of the police. The attempt to highlight a non-notable element of a news story in order to downplay the incident was either an act of incomprehensible incompetence, or a transparent attempt to dismiss it, and that is exactly what I objected to in the beginning of this thread, as the editor in question purposefully altered the relevant story to a non-notable one by changing the title. It was ridiculous then and it remains ridiculous now.

10:54, 29 January 2012

Gee. What a proctologist!

Let's see you write a news article then, instead of throwing peanuts from the cheap seats.

15:14, 29 January 2012

Shouldn't you be on Facebook updating your friends list? It doesn't look like you're writing any news articles on this dead site. Viriditas (talk) 01:29, 31 January 2012 (UTC)

01:29, 31 January 2012

Lemmie see,…

I wrote this a few days ago.

Doubt you could do anywhere near as well — except as a troll, which you're excelling at so far.

11:06, 1 February 2012

Now I know why that article is on top of the front page. This isn't Wikinews, this is Brian McNeil's ego-news. Thank you for explaining everything, it all makes sense now. No wonder there isn't anyone writing here. It's you and the tumbleweeds, Brian.

11:28, 1 February 2012

Luckily this is the comments namespace, you can troll all you like.

Hint: I'm not responsible for any of the other lead articles, so your implication holds less water than a colander.

12:05, 1 February 2012