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== Sources ==
* https://learningenglish.voanews.com/a/4283148.html
* https://nypost.com/2018/03/05/storm-claims-227-year-old-tree-planted-by-george-washington/
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Friday's major winter storm over the northeastern United States claimed a 227-year-old tree on the estate of the first US President George Washington, Mount Vernon, in Virginia.
== Sources ==
* https://learningenglish.voanews.com/a/4283148.html
* https://nypost.com/2018/03/05/storm-claims-227-year-old-tree-planted-by-george-washington/
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- Answer the 5Ws: why, who, what, where, why, how, when.
- Maximum two or three sentences.
- Write in past tense.
- Leave sources at the bottom.
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... According to Mount Vernon officials, the hemlock is the best documented tree at the estate, sent by New York Governor George Clinton as a gift delivered in a whisky barrel.
== Sources ==
*{{source
|url=https://learningenglish.voanews.com/a/4283148.html
|title=George Washington’s Tree Brought Down by Strong Winds
|author=Ashley Thompson
|pub=VOA News
|date=March 6, 2018
}}
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Step 4. Unfold the story.
Friday's major winter storm over the northeastern United States claimed a 227-year-old tree on the estate of the first US President George Washington, Mount Vernon, in Virginia.
The hemlock, planted in 1791, was toppled by the gusts reportedly up to 70 mph (about 110 kph) on Friday.
Mount Vernon was Washington's personal estate, where he conducted most of his two presidential terms between 1789–1797 because the initial White House was not completed yet. According to Mount Vernon officials, the hemlock is the best documented tree at the estate, sent by New York Governor George Clinton as a gift delivered in a whisky barrel.
== Sources ==
* https://learningenglish.voanews.com/a/4283148.html
* https://nypost.com/2018/03/05/storm-claims-227-year-old-tree-planted-by-george-washington/
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Step 5. Add wikilinks.
Friday's major winter storm over the northeastern United States claimed a 227-year-old tree on the estate of the first US President {{W|George Washington}}, {{W|Mount Vernon}}, in {{w|Virginia}}.
The {{w|Canadian hemlock}}, planted in 1791, was toppled by the gusts reportedly up to 70 mph (about 110 kph) on Friday.
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[[File:Mount Vernon 1.jpg|thumb|left|File photo of the main building at Mount Vernon {{image|Aaron Barlow}}]]
Friday's major winter storm over the northeastern United States claimed a ...
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|date=March 5, 2018
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[[Category:United Kingdom]]
[[Category:Disasters and accidents]]
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[[File:Mount Vernon 1.jpg|thumb|left|File photo of the main building at Mount Vernon {{image|Aaron Barlow}}]]
Friday's major winter storm over the northeastern United States claimed a 227-year-old tree on the estate of the first US President {{W|George Washington}}, {{W|Mount Vernon}}, in {{w|Virginia}}. ...
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[[File:Mount Vernon 1.jpg|thumb|left|File photo of the main building at Mount Vernon {{image|Aaron Barlow}}]]
Friday's major winter storm over the northeastern United States claimed a 227-year-old tree on the estate of the first US President {{W|George Washington}}, {{W|Mount Vernon}}, in {{w|Virginia}}.
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