User talk:Aideenuow/Bushranger Ned Kelly's remains found

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This headline needs some clarification for an international audience, who cannot be assumed to know who Ned Kelly was (I've heard of him, but then, I have behind me a misspent youth of watching educational television :-). A well-chosen word or two might do the trick; but as the headline now stands, readers don't know from the headline that this is an historical figure rather than, say, a missing child case. --Pi zero (talk) 14:27, 2 September 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! I was unsure of how much information to provide in the headline, hopefully the new title is an improvement? Aideenuow (talk) 2 September 2011

Much better, I think. --Pi zero (talk) 17:56, 2 September 2011 (UTC)

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