User talk:CLD934/Tie belonging to the late John Lennon sells for over £3000 at auction

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Review of revision 1975729 [Not ready][edit]

Addressing these changes[edit]

Hi

I have addressed these changes as best I can.

I apologise for the source formatting, I am still finding this part dreadfully confusing at the best of times.

Please can you re-review this article as soon as possible. I would hate for this story to become even more stale.

Many Thanks

Chelsea Deeley

Review of revision 1976760 [Not ready][edit]

  • The fourth paragraph isn't grammatical, and its intended meaning is not clear from reading it. --Pi zero (talk) 23:52, 27 August 2013 (UTC)