User talk:Elogan415uow/Violence in Myanmar continues

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Headline[edit]

The headline should tell the most important and unique thing about the focal news event of the article. The current headline is generic, and instead of describing the focal news event it describes an ongoing process — the standard illustration of the specificity required of a news focus is that an earthquake is a specific event, while continental drift is not. --Pi zero (talk) 17:44, 3 May 2013 (UTC)

Review of revision 1891784 [Not ready][edit]

  • I should mention, another reason for multiple sources, and another reason for reading them all first, is neutrality. This article feels a bit off in that regard. --Pi zero (talk) 20:56, 3 May 2013 (UTC)