Please read the style guide; many simple mistakes can be avoided thereby, which would make review (which is already a big task asked of volunteer reviewers) more onerous. Things I can immediately see:
No external links are allowed in the body of an article. Key places and people (and occasionally other words, but mostly places and people) should be wikilinked using {{w}}, like this: {{w|Cairo}} produces: Cairo.
There should be an infobox, preferably a picture of some sort, and the article should be categorized. See similar articles for examples.
Date format, as specified in the style guide, is "Month day, year". For example, "August 13, 2013"
There's some kind of problem in the sources section, an extra }}. Surely that can be cleaned up?
Authors in the Sources section should be Mixed Case, rather than ALL CAPS.
If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.
Please read the style guide; many simple mistakes can be avoided thereby, which would make review (which is already a big task asked of volunteer reviewers) more onerous. Things I can immediately see:
No external links are allowed in the body of an article. Key places and people (and occasionally other words, but mostly places and people) should be wikilinked using {{w}}, like this: {{w|Cairo}} produces: Cairo.
There should be an infobox, preferably a picture of some sort, and the article should be categorized. See similar articles for examples.
Date format, as specified in the style guide, is "Month day, year". For example, "August 13, 2013"
There's some kind of problem in the sources section, an extra }}. Surely that can be cleaned up?
Authors in the Sources section should be Mixed Case, rather than ALL CAPS.
If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.
If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.
If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.
