Talk:British Member of Parliament David Taylor dies

Review of revision 928325 [Failed]

Revision 928325 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:14, 27 December 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Not checked either - although I strongly doubt all those sources are needed to back up facts in the article. NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Should be a minimum of three paragraphs; several f these 'paragraphs' are actually single sentences. The sources templates have been screwed around with random nonsense inserted into the date parameter. Title not written for an international audience; what is an MP? Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 928325 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:14, 27 December 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Not checked either - although I strongly doubt all those sources are needed to back up facts in the article. NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Should be a minimum of three paragraphs; several f these 'paragraphs' are actually single sentences. The sources templates have been screwed around with random nonsense inserted into the date parameter. Title not written for an international audience; what is an MP? Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 928557 [Passed]

Revision 928557 of this article has been reviewed by James Pain (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:25, 27 December 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: All good to go The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 928557 of this article has been reviewed by James Pain (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:25, 27 December 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: All good to go The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.