Talk:Canadian track and field coach Charlie Francis dies at age 61

Review of revision 1018505 [Failed]

Revision 1018505 of this article has been reviewed by James Pain (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:30, 13 May 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Some things stated in the article are not stated in sources such as athletes trained and the cancer annoused by family. NPOV: Passed Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: I'd also suggest the info box be changed to Obituaries Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1018505 of this article has been reviewed by James Pain (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:30, 13 May 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Some things stated in the article are not stated in sources such as athletes trained and the cancer annoused by family. NPOV: Passed Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: I'd also suggest the info box be changed to Obituaries Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Repeating runners names

Before I pass this, could you just fix when you repeat that he's trained runners. Getting rid of "Francis trained athletes such as Ben Johnson and Marion Jones" in the first paragraph and linking "Ben Johnson" in the second paragraph and "Marion Jones" in the last paragraph should do the trick, --James Pain (talk) 14:11, 13 May 2010 (UTC)

Done

Links have been changed, obituaries added as side bookmark and unsourced infomation removed. Chandlerjoeyross (talk) 14:25, 13 May 2010 (UTC)

Review of revision 1018671 [Passed]

Revision 1018671 of this article has been reviewed by James Pain (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:26, 13 May 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Good job! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1018671 of this article has been reviewed by James Pain (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:26, 13 May 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Good job! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.