Talk:Ghana buries late President Mills

Review of revision 1580460 [Not ready]

Revision 1580460 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:00, 9 August 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: The problem here is the focus of the lede. A newsworthy article focuses on a news event that is specific, relevant, and fresh. The three-day mourning is fresh; the death is not, as it happened last month. The headline correctly identifies the mourning as the focus. But the lede should summarize the focal news event by succinctly answering as many as reasonably possible of the basic questions about the focus. Here, however, the lede is about the death, not the mourning. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1580460 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:00, 9 August 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: The problem here is the focus of the lede. A newsworthy article focuses on a news event that is specific, relevant, and fresh. The three-day mourning is fresh; the death is not, as it happened last month. The headline correctly identifies the mourning as the focus. But the lede should summarize the focal news event by succinctly answering as many as reasonably possible of the basic questions about the focus. Here, however, the lede is about the death, not the mourning. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1581895 [Passed]

Revision 1581895 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:33, 10 August 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: A creditable first article. :-) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1581895 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:33, 10 August 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: A creditable first article. :-) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.