Talk:Miami police shoot, kill naked man chewing face of male victim

Review of revision 1512140 [Passed]

Revision 1512140 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:37, 27 May 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The second paragraph had a hole in the action, between the first shot and taking the victim to the hospital. I tried to be minimal about repair, noting the information in the fix is present elsewhere in the article. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1512140 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:37, 27 May 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: The second paragraph had a hole in the action, between the first shot and taking the victim to the hospital. I tried to be minimal about repair, noting the information in the fix is present elsewhere in the article. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Changed some stuff around. How does it look now? --Patrick M (TUFKAAP) (talk) 15:54, 28 May 2012 (UTC)