Comments:Former Wikileaks employee destroys unpublished leaked documents
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Comments from feedback form - "This article has a ways to go ..." | 0 | 03:28, 24 August 2011 |
Comments from feedback form - "Very well written, very compre..." | 2 | 21:44, 23 August 2011 |
This article has a ways to go grammatically. For instance, what does it mean that he/she has destroyed the leaks TO Julian Assange's site? Do you mean he/she has removed them from the site? Punctuation and capitalization aren't perfect either; it should read, "...between the pair, and has now..."
Furthermore I think this article uses too many quotations for things that could just be reworded.
Also I believe there's more weight put on the perspective of OpenLeaks than that of Wikileaks.