Comments:Volcanic eruption starts on top of Eyjafjallajökull, Iceland

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Comments from feedback form - "it is not clear and does not s..."

it is not clear and does not state all the information!!! POORRR!!!

41.215.127.58 (talk)08:53, 7 January 2011

Comments from feedback form - "Needs written more in the pass..."

Needs written more in the passive voice.

"The current eruption appears to be much more powerful." Is too subjective and needs to be written in the passive voice.

208.69.128.41 (talk)13:34, 15 April 2010

News articles are normally more active than most prose. (I hope I have that right)

Mikemoral♪♫00:15, 10 June 2010
 

Comments from feedback form - "it is crap"

it is crap

86.181.5.246 (talk)08:03, 18 April 2010