Comments:Volcanic eruption starts on top of Eyjafjallajökull, Iceland
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|Comments from feedback form - "it is not clear and does not s..."||0||08:53, 7 January 2011|
|Comments from feedback form - "Needs written more in the pass..."||1||00:15, 10 June 2010|
|Comments from feedback form - "it is crap"||0||08:03, 18 April 2010|
Needs written more in the passive voice.
"The current eruption appears to be much more powerful." Is too subjective and needs to be written in the passive voice.