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Latest comment: 16 years ago by BrockF5 in topic Critique

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I'm now at the Press CEnter, I earlier recorded the opening speech of Mr. Ma, I will upload more photos later. Brock contact... 09:57, 3 June 2008 (UTC)Reply

Critique

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  • "Exhibition scale expanding by 53%"
    • In what unit of measurement?
    • From, or preferably to what?
  • " "...participating manufacturers increating by 29%"
    • What was it last year?
    • What is the number for this year?
  • "WING"
    • This acronym is not explained, as was highlighted on the comments page.

--Brian McNeil / talk 12:47, 4 June 2008 (UTC)Reply

Correction, WING is explained but it is like Douglas Adams says, "in the bottom of a locked filing cabinet in the cellar that the stairs to are missing". --Brian McNeil / talk 12:52, 4 June 2008 (UTC)Reply
Show data about exhibited companies and spaces from 2005 to 2008 added. Brock contact... 05:16, 5 June 2008 (UTC)Reply

There seems to be a misunderstanding. I appreciate your coverage of the technology scene in Taiwan, I just thought you might like to know that your syntax is hard to follow and come off as SPAM like. The use of marketing acronyms like WING and MUST or covering very commercial things like Doritos Coolpedia seem out of place at wikinews. Basically these articles feel like an advertisement for something. 71.56.114.89 19:03, 5 June 2008 (UTC)Reply

You always don't look at the key paragraph explained on MUST or WING, MUST at WiMAX Expo ever expressed by John Hsuan at a press conference as 4 key elements, also, the "W-I-N-G" is, ever explained by TCA, I wrote in the latest paragraph. Brock contact... 04:32, 6 June 2008 (UTC)Reply