Talk:40 alleged drunken Santas accused of running amok

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Thes is wacky, i will work on it! International 17:39, 20 December 2005 (UTC)

Title[edit]

I propose "Santas protest the commercialisation of Christmas" International 18:07, 20 December 2005 (UTC)

not

"40 alledged drunken Santas accused of riot by media and police" International 19:51, 20 December 2005 (UTC)


...or at least "Forty alleged drunk Santas accused of riot by media and police" which is the grammatically correct version of the current title! -Etoile (posting as 216.220.208.123 22:19, 20 December 2005 (UTC))

ok "drunk". Is "running amok" bad language and should be replaced with riot? International 22:29, 20 December 2005 (UTC)


Title revert war today again[edit]

Oh Noooooooo! *<;D>

International 23:11, 20 December 2005 (UTC)

Not ready for publishing[edit]

This article is not ready. "An event, 17 december, organized in the forum of a online skateboard magazine rented big media publicity for good or worse..." -- what does that mean? It's improper grammar. In addition, the article seems to quote a "Santa" — since it can't be the Santa, it must mean a person, but this is unclear. Please adapt to good newswriting style before republishing. -- IlyaHaykinson 23:19, 20 December 2005 (UTC)

Help needed![edit]

Im not too good at english so I have to ask other Wikinewsies to help with copyedit of this article. International 23:42, 20 December 2005 (UTC)

Article ready?[edit]

Somewikinewsie who think the article is good enough, feel free to publish International 01:55, 21 December 2005 (UTC)

Whats wrong w/ wackynews? Bawolff ☺☻Smile.png 02:50, 21 December 2005 (UTC)
I dont think its enough wacky anymore but if you think so put it back again International 03:17, 21 December 2005 (UTC)