Talk:7.3-magnitude earthquake strikes Vanuatu

Review of revision 4831998 [Not ready]

Revision 4831998 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:44, 23 December 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: See below Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: WN:5Ws not adequately addressed. See below Comments by reviewer: This article would be much better if the focal event was shifted to the people affected, rather than the occurrence of the earthquake itself. Shifting the focal event will make it easier to compose a fuller lede and will make the article more engaging, by focusing on the human aspect of the story, rather than the geological event. An earth quake on its own is not necessarily newsworthy. The damaged caused by it in this case is. For example, if the new focal event for the article is; Vanuatu shaken by powerful quake, emergency response declared, the 5Ws+H framework would provide the following: Who: Residents of Vanuatu, particularly in the capital city, Port Vila. What: A powerful earthquake resulting in at least fourteen deaths and over 200 injuries. When: Tuesday, December 17, 2024, at approximately 12:47 PM local time. Where: The epicenter was about 30 kilometers west of Port Vila, Vanuatu. Why: Vanuatu is situated on the Pacific "Ring of Fire," making it prone to seismic activity. How: The earthquake caused buildings to collapse, landslides, and infrastructure damage, leading to casualties and injuries. Given that the current focal event will be stale in a day, it would also be good (if possible) to refocus on an event that will extend that time before going stale. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4831998 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:44, 23 December 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: See below Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: WN:5Ws not adequately addressed. See below Comments by reviewer: This article would be much better if the focal event was shifted to the people affected, rather than the occurrence of the earthquake itself. Shifting the focal event will make it easier to compose a fuller lede and will make the article more engaging, by focusing on the human aspect of the story, rather than the geological event. An earth quake on its own is not necessarily newsworthy. The damaged caused by it in this case is. For example, if the new focal event for the article is; Vanuatu shaken by powerful quake, emergency response declared, the 5Ws+H framework would provide the following: Who: Residents of Vanuatu, particularly in the capital city, Port Vila. What: A powerful earthquake resulting in at least fourteen deaths and over 200 injuries. When: Tuesday, December 17, 2024, at approximately 12:47 PM local time. Where: The epicenter was about 30 kilometers west of Port Vila, Vanuatu. Why: Vanuatu is situated on the Pacific "Ring of Fire," making it prone to seismic activity. How: The earthquake caused buildings to collapse, landslides, and infrastructure damage, leading to casualties and injuries. Given that the current focal event will be stale in a day, it would also be good (if possible) to refocus on an event that will extend that time before going stale. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.