Talk:Canadian military aircraft escort airliner after bomb threat
Review of revision 1020960 [Failed][edit]
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Revision 1020960 of this article has been reviewed by Gopher65 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:34, 16 May 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: You have to absorb the material from the sources and then write it in your own words, not just slightly rewrite the sentences. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1020960 of this article has been reviewed by Gopher65 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:34, 16 May 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: You have to absorb the material from the sources and then write it in your own words, not just slightly rewrite the sentences. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Review of revision 1020977 [Passed][edit]
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Revision 1020977 of this article has been reviewed by Gopher65 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:58, 16 May 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Still a bit too close, but meh. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1020977 of this article has been reviewed by Gopher65 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 01:58, 16 May 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Still a bit too close, but meh. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Review of revision 1020984 [Passed][edit]
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Revision 1020984 of this article has been reviewed by Gopher65 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:02, 16 May 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1020984 of this article has been reviewed by Gopher65 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:02, 16 May 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |