Talk:Argentina thrash Serbia and Montenegro in Group C

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Nice.[edit]

Well written. Well written. Do you mind if I take out the passive voice stuff? Tom12384 17:16, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

also[edit]

It should be Argentina thrashes Serbia and Montenegro in Group C

--Tom12384 19:58, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, no. It's a discretionary plural because "Argentina" in this case refers to the Argentine players. --Deprifry|+T+ 21:20, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Releasing Excitement[edit]

Better than me editing this in the article: GO ARGENTINA! DOMINATION! 65.172.9.237 23:07, 16 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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I am new to this. You are definitely right. And there is no passive voice. Something about when I read it makes my brain work harder. I can't explain why. Is it possible this article was written by an english as second language speaker? The style is very polite, unlike american english dialogue (especially about soccer!)

Well, I'm learning slowly.

--Tom12384 17:51, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

hmm, bad titles[edit]

I'm reminded of RF?'s comment about how we need article numbers, not titles. It's not bad at this level, but we'll start title conflicts with next year once we get later in matchs.  :( Nyarlathotep 19:47, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]