Talk:Boston Celtics defeat Dallas Mavericks, earning championship title
Pre-review
[edit]Status: Recommend publish
Version evaluated: 4787169
- Copyright:
Passed - Newsworthiness: Passed
- Verifiability: Passed
- NPOV: Passed
- Style: Passed
Notes for author(s):
Mostly good, but a few comments.
- We generally spell numbers under 20.
- Try to avoid opinions like "historic".
- I have changed "the duo" to "Tatum and Brown" and the like.
- I have added some links to Wikipedia. This can be done by adding {{w|}} and inserting a link as you normally would between the | and the }}.
- I have added some categories and removed one (Major League Baseball) that made no sense.
- I did not need the final 2 sources to verify anything. If they are not needed, please remove them.
Notes for reviewer:
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Very good article
[edit]I think this has shaped up to be a very good article. I think it stands a good chance of passing a review.
We are short on sports writers so I hope to see the author register an account and stick around for a while!
A few things to note;
- Always give image creators credit using the {{image}} template.
- We don't use in-line links to other wikinews articles. Instead we link to them in the Related news section. Bonus; you can use those articles as sources (as you did).
- I felt like the end of the article looked cluttered and disorganized with the two images, the infobox, and the table. I removed an image and rearranged some things to try to alleviate that. However, feel free to undo those changes or move things around however you like.
Michael.C.Wright (Talk/Published) 15:05, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
Possible extension
[edit]By the way, the celebrations are ongoing, and even now, as of June 26, if you search Google for the word "Celtics," you can still find new (dated "X hours ago") news results about celebrations of the victory. Example: this article from 12 hours ago. 173.76.102.69 (talk) 03:19, 27 June 2024 (UTC)