Talk:Chelsea beats Arsenal in Carling Cup

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First Hand Reporting Summary[edit]

My first hand reporting involved watching the game live on television, and writing notes as I went, I then converted the notes into this report. The website listed was used for reference only.Dark Squall 15:58, 26 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comment[edit]

Title should be rephrased to something more understandable for an international, non-football-specialist audience. Also watch out for WN:NPOV, original reporting is not a free ticket to subjective reporting!--Steven Fruitsmaak (Reply) 16:47, 26 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I'd just like to say im not biased towards either of these teams, infact, i dislike both of them pretty much equally. I thank you for editing the name, i will be more careful in my title choices hence-forth.Dark Squall 00:08, 27 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
That's not what I wanted to warn you for: your writing style uses a lot of adjectives that are based on a personal appreciation, such as "heated", "crisp passing and great control",...--Steven Fruitsmaak (Reply) 10:31, 27 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, fair enough, ill make sure to watch that, thanks for clarifying.Dark Squall 20:36, 27 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]