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Latest comment: 18 years ago by Borofkin

This story is written in journalistic format. I am a professional journalist and know how to write paragraphs.

Please review our content guide. We are not a traditional news source. --MrMiscellanious (talk) – 19:52, 18 May 2006 (UTC)Reply
Regarding paragraphs, the style guide states:
Beyond the first paragraph, try to stick to the following tips:
  • use brief paragraphs - between 30 and 80 words is considered acceptable in newspaper writing
  • each paragraph should be only one or two sentences (three if you use very short sentences)
  • each paragraph covers a single topic only
The paragraphs in this article are about 20-30 words, so possibly slightly short, but apart from that, how does this article not conform to the style guide? - Borofkin 00:45, 19 May 2006 (UTC)Reply