Talk:Washington politician Dino Rossi to announce US Senate bid

This is my first article submission for WikiNews. Your feedback is appreciated. Thanks! PoliticalSentinel (talk) 03:03, 25 May 2010 (UTC)

Review of revision 1027900 [Failed]

Revision 1027900 of this article has been reviewed by HJ Mitchell (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 12:03, 25 May 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Not ready: I've tried to copyedit it out, but there seems to be a subtle pro-Rossi bias. For example, I removed the word "formidable" for which there is rarely a legitimate use in a neutral news article Style: Not ready: The vast majority of the middle apragrpah makes no sense whatsoever to me, and I follow American politics. How is any other non-American supposed to follow it? Comments by reviewer: I'm sorry to fail this after it waited so long for a review, but I don't feel able to fix these issues myself. Once they're addressed, I'll be happy to re-review. Sorry. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 12:03, 25 May 2010 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1027900 of this article has been reviewed by HJ Mitchell (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 12:03, 25 May 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Not ready: I've tried to copyedit it out, but there seems to be a subtle pro-Rossi bias. For example, I removed the word "formidable" for which there is rarely a legitimate use in a neutral news article Style: Not ready: The vast majority of the middle apragrpah makes no sense whatsoever to me, and I follow American politics. How is any other non-American supposed to follow it? Comments by reviewer: I'm sorry to fail this after it waited so long for a review, but I don't feel able to fix these issues myself. Once they're addressed, I'll be happy to re-review. Sorry. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 12:03, 25 May 2010 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Thanks for the input

Thank you for the input HJ. Like it said, this is my first post so I was looking for feedback. I tried to fix the issue of the middle paragraph with more details and explanation. I'm sorry if I portrayed a pro-Rossi stance, that was absolutely not my intention. Please let me know if I have more to fix.

Review of revision 1028116 [Passed]

Revision 1028116 of this article has been reviewed by Benny the mascot (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:18, 25 May 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Good job on your first article! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1028116 of this article has been reviewed by Benny the mascot (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:18, 25 May 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Good job on your first article! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.