Talk:Fizzy drinks out of New Zealand schools from 2009
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I used the announcement from Pete Hodgson (listed). --Nzgabriel | Talk 05:31, 11 December 2006 (UTC)
Needs a bit of work.[edit]
Far too much use of the word agreement. It creates a very redundant article. Other than that rather well written. I recommend you read here: http://www.lifehack.org/articles/lifehack/fifty-50-tools-which-can-help-you-in-writing.html
It links to old articles by Poynter, a well respected journalism school