Talk:Four US soldiers face disciplinary action for burning Taliban soldiers' bodies

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Please make sure that you don't introduce factual errors when reqriting. (Reading the sources might help!) I fixed the error, put the explanation why the buring is problematic back in the text and added an explanation why the broadcasting was problematic. --vonbergm 00:39, 28 November 2005 (UTC)

title[edit]

The new title is a little bit problematic as it is factually wrong as only two of the soldiers face disciplinary actions for the burnings. Maybe the person who introduced the error can fix is, or if someone else also likes the old title better (or has another idea), I welcome another title change. If one additionally wants to be more precise would could specify "officers" instead of "soldiers". --vonbergm 00:44, 28 November 2005 (UTC)

comment on footage[edit]

Right now the comment about the footage is quite unmotivated and does not make sense unless one has followed the story closely or read the "related news" articles. Whoever put it in might want to expand to eplain its significance, or simply remove it.