Talk:Islamabad on red alert

Review of revision 1967213 [Not ready]

Revision 1967213 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 06:04, 5 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: Before beginning, it looks like the author did not look at examples of published articles on the main page, nor read the style guide in terms of how to cite sources, interwiki links, times, etc. This is vitally important to be done. Failure to read the style guide and model after successfully published articles makes it infinitely more difficult to get a first article published. )Picture trying to get a C on an assignment when you do not read the assignment requirements.) That said... Fix the source formatting. This is a huge number of sources for a reviewer to verify, and if you cannot be bothered to format them correctly, why should we be bothered to fix them and then use them to check your facts? Title is not a sentence. It needs a rename. Look at example titles from main page. External links need to be removed from article. Interwiki links to Wikipedia and Wikinews need to replace it. You do not cite sources by providing external links like that. The lead is missing key information. What recent threat of possible terror attacks? Is this domestic, international, aimed at Australian interests in the country or school girls in the country? What officials were alerted? Officials at the local football club? Please add an image, an infobox, and bluelinked categories. Please address all these comments before resubmitting and realize you will likely have other things to fix after that. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1967213 of this article has been reviewed by LauraHale (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 06:04, 5 August 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: Before beginning, it looks like the author did not look at examples of published articles on the main page, nor read the style guide in terms of how to cite sources, interwiki links, times, etc. This is vitally important to be done. Failure to read the style guide and model after successfully published articles makes it infinitely more difficult to get a first article published. )Picture trying to get a C on an assignment when you do not read the assignment requirements.) That said... Fix the source formatting. This is a huge number of sources for a reviewer to verify, and if you cannot be bothered to format them correctly, why should we be bothered to fix them and then use them to check your facts? Title is not a sentence. It needs a rename. Look at example titles from main page. External links need to be removed from article. Interwiki links to Wikipedia and Wikinews need to replace it. You do not cite sources by providing external links like that. The lead is missing key information. What recent threat of possible terror attacks? Is this domestic, international, aimed at Australian interests in the country or school girls in the country? What officials were alerted? Officials at the local football club? Please add an image, an infobox, and bluelinked categories. Please address all these comments before resubmitting and realize you will likely have other things to fix after that. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Interwiki links

How do you add Interwiki links to Wikipedia, I can't seem to do it correctly? Dominika uow (talk) 07:10, 5 August 2013 (UTC)

Renaming an article

How do I rename my article? Dominika uow (talk) 08:28, 5 August 2013 (UTC)