Talk:Malaysian Home Ministry ban approved documentary

Phew

OK. Working on putting the important information first. The name of the filmmaker feels too late in the article.

I'm having trouble deciding what is important information. I'm chipping away at that when I have time.

Oh and the headline still doesn't sound good. It's suppose to convey a movie that is now banned was once approved. I think I need a new, less convoluted angle.

It most definitely needs a description of the film itself early in the piece. --Tshase 12:04, 25 May 2006 (UTC)

Film synopsis

Added film info including film festival info.--Tshase 07:04, 26 May 2006 (UTC)

Film review excerpt to familiarise the reader to the filmmaker. Took out film summary, as emphasis is on the reputation of the film. --Tshase 04:53, 2 June 2006 (UTC)

bias

A perceived bias is an over reliance on reproductions of articles made available through the filmmaker's website.--Tshase 04:44, 2 June 2006 (UTC)