Talk:Pigs fed contaminated pet food; meat sold to consumers

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Dragonfire, I think the title needs to be reworked. The way it is written, "Contaminated pet food fed to pigs used for human consumption", sounds like the contaminated pet food was used for human consumption. You meant that the pigs were used for human consumption, so you might need to check the grammar. Perhaps something like, "Pigs fed contaminated pet food; meat sold to consumers" or something like that? Jcart1534 12:26, 21 April 2007 (UTC) The grammar is fine, actually. I think it could be a little less ambiguous though. :) Cheers, Jcart1534 14:18, 21 April 2007 (UTC)Reply[reply]

) done DragonFire1024 18:26, 21 April 2007 (UTC)Reply[reply]