Talk:Sainsbury's posts first ever loss

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Nice article. Perhaps an addition of some background on Sainsbury's, but it could be published now. Lyellin 23:19, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)

Comprehensiveness

My objection: I don't know Sainsbury's supermarket chain because I dont live in UK. So, I dont know what Sainsbury is by its title. A little change in the title would be welcome. Something like: Sainsbury's UK supermarket chain makes first ever loss would be correct? --carlosar 01:25 Nov 18 2004 (UTC)

I don't know Sainsbury's either, but as long as it's in a business section, I don't think it matters - as I said on the Kmart-Sears page, I think the alternatives are too unwieldy. This is the sort of title you'd expect from a regular news service. Ambi 13:03, 18 Nov 2004 (UTC)

Maybe you are right. It is ok for me. carlosar Nov 18 17:59:32 UTC 2004

Same title in BBC News. Trouble?

The article's title here and in BBC News are the same. Any trouble? --carlosar Nov 18 17:41:58 UTC 2004

Good point, i'll move it to Sainsbury's posts first ever loss CGorman 18:18, 18 Nov 2004 (UTC)