Talk:The Next Consortium of ITRI launches 'RoboScooter'

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OR[edit]

I participated in a product launch press conference by ITRI at NTUH International Convention Center, the organizer showcased its solution on several functions at there. Brock contact... 12:41, 29 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Not ready to be published yet[edit]

  1. Title of the article isn't really best, doesn't read well with me and isn't grammatically the best here. Cirt - (talk) 14:12, 2 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done DragonFire1024 (Talk to the Dragon) 03:06, 9 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Readability/grammar concerns in the article, needs some copy-editing. Cirt - (talk) 14:12, 2 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done i think. DragonFire1024 (Talk to the Dragon) 03:06, 9 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Needs some background explanation of the topic for the lay-reader. Cirt - (talk) 14:12, 2 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
This is a lot of OR and unfortunately there is a language barrier here. I looked over the article and tried a few times to c/e. So I really am hesitant to copy/edit as I don't want to change his report and his OR. DragonFire1024 (Talk to the Dragon) 00:45, 3 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Think I got it. DragonFire1024 (Talk to the Dragon) 03:06, 9 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Official News Release[edit]

I have forwarded to Wikinews Mailist, I will explain to Alvin Liang Kuo because of paragraph-checking, if this mode is OK, May I forward some official English news releases into Wikinews Mailist for future Copy-editing? But On the other hand, if it's an interview, what will I do? Brock contact... 06:42, 3 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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