Talk:Worldwide student competition brings WTO debate battle to Geneva

I have tried to improve the article as much as I could: - shortened it - made it more neutral - only saying that the event is taking place and one quote from the WTO Appellate Body which this competition is trying to simulate - added some sources - deleted external links as I found Wikipedia pages for the organisers I do hope this is better now. Please let me know if there can be more improvements done. I will accept all comments. Thanks! Mogmaria 13:58, 5 May 2007 (UTC)

It is getting better, but you need to write in your own words. I read the opening paragraph and found several phrases that were copied from the first source.

Secondly, the dateline use. Are you currently in Geneva? If not, you can't use this - sorry! --Brian McNeil / ^talk 14:06, 5 May 2007 (UTC)

Oh, I'm not going to add publish, but I'll not stop someone else doing so - see what you get as a second opinion. --Brian McNeil / ^talk 14:07, 5 May 2007 (UTC)

NPOV tag

Please add specific paragraphs or things that you dispute on the talk page, don't just slap the tag on, harder to see if it has improved since.--Steven Fruitsmaak (Reply) 12:11, 2 May 2007 (UTC)

Improvements

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• "fulfils" => If the quote is correct [sic] should be added, if it is incorrect, it should be "fulfills"
• The "all costs, no benefits" source has a new location, namely here
• The latter two sources have the same URL. The second is wrong and should be this one

Van der Hoorn (talk) 15:48, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

Done ♪Tempo di Valse ♪ 19:00, 15 March 2009 (UTC)