I'm not an english teacher but...
Appearance
"A dead headless man" - "dead" probably did not need mentioning! As opposed to what... a "live" headless man? is Ichabod Crane still around?
"A dead headless man" - "dead" probably did not need mentioning! As opposed to what... a "live" headless man? is Ichabod Crane still around?
Yeah, the world's full of undead. Your comment is very insensitive. They have feelings too... Okay, seriously, I'll remove dead if it hasn't been done already.
Edit: It was already changed.